tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post2615682500101318956..comments2023-07-27T07:23:11.765-07:00Comments on Yarning to Write: Oh yeah... and school started!Amy Lanehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/04885706951931450373noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-55643856770809921762009-08-23T12:27:34.906-07:002009-08-23T12:27:34.906-07:00The publisher will be dead impressed you finished ...The publisher will be dead impressed you finished the rest of the stories so quickly. Well done!<br /><br />Thanks to everyone for your kind comments about my story - <i>and</i> for the editing suggestion. I won't bother to change it on my LJ but my master copy now starts with the para about the wings.fawatsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03629592605834740684noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-53384321169667135622009-08-21T12:20:16.638-07:002009-08-21T12:20:16.638-07:00Actually I kinda figured it was m/m . . . . so, wh...Actually I kinda figured it was m/m . . . . so, when and where can we find these newly published stories? :0)DecRainKhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10992322635823740922noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-77930715111821217262009-08-21T11:06:02.753-07:002009-08-21T11:06:02.753-07:00I knew there were fairy godmothers. Great story!I knew there were fairy godmothers. Great story!Galadhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09246042661575565455noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-17689218738202487622009-08-21T06:00:10.365-07:002009-08-21T06:00:10.365-07:00M/M erotic romance? Good for you, dear! You seem...M/M erotic romance? Good for you, dear! You seem to have quite the - touch - for it. And hooray again for getting published!!<br /><br />The short story is wuunnnerful! I couldn't comment on Live Journal, since I'm not a user, so would you pass on my congratulations? And one suggestion - Drop the first paragraph. Starting with her dropping her wings is a real hook.roxiehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14916948065233137971noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-90269086365872545652009-08-21T05:20:12.142-07:002009-08-21T05:20:12.142-07:00That was a wonderful (and tear inducing) story!
...That was a wonderful (and tear inducing) story! <br /><br />And m/m fiction doesn't have to be my cup of tea for me to tell (after reading some of course)that you are a wonderful writer. Your characters are so alive on the page and so real. That's one of the hardest things to do, make a character come to life and not to lie dead on the page.<br /><br />And my verification word? Stifi. One of my husband's favorite words....Donna Leehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07877384848664758611noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-29866711243414005012009-08-21T02:17:05.104-07:002009-08-21T02:17:05.104-07:00That's a fantastic story. I'd like to see ...That's a fantastic story. I'd like to see more:)Louizhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05691100508790921779noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-7038815217243908035.post-82463297067681296162009-08-21T00:13:11.325-07:002009-08-21T00:13:11.325-07:00My mum is sending my latest torture-and-murder-fil...My mum is sending my latest torture-and-murder-filled novel chapter-by-chapter to my grandparents. The sex doesn't start until book 2 though...Rachel Cotterillhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08969719330048416996noreply@blogger.com